THIS IS FOR ALLROUNDTUTOR

Please ensure that each post is a minimum of 100 words. for each part

Part 1 english

The second stage of the writing process is developing,  made me realize that I could improve my current method of writing?  What do you need to focus on to become a better writer?  Which of the exploring techniques do you think you will use the most?  Why?  Which of the developing techniques do you think will be most helpful to you?  What is different about some of the choices your classmates made?

part 2  history

Historians often consider cities and writings as essential components that determine a civilization.  Do you agree with this thesis?  Is there more to a civilization than writing and urbanization?  Explain.