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Part 1 History needs atleat 100 words

The reason for the crusades was a war between Christians and Moslems which centered on the city of Jerusalem. The City of Jerusalem held a Holy significance to the Christian religion. The Church of the Holy Sepulchre in Jerusalem commemorated the hill of crucifixion and the tomb of Christ's burial and was visited by Pilgrims. In 1065 Jerusalem was taken by the Turks and 3000 Christians were massacred starting a chain of events which contributed to the cause of the crusade.

While the crusades achieved only temporary military success, they had a powerful impact on Western Europe. The crusaders returned with a vastly widened knowledge of the world they lived in, and a willingness to explore that became a permanent part of the west European mindset. In religion, culture, and commerce, post-Crusades Europe was visibly affected by its prolonged encounter with another continent and another way of life.

Part 2 English   just revise the following.  atleast 100 words if possible

I chose the word “run”, according to dictionary.com there are 179 different definitions for the word.

Three examples of what run is not:

For something to run it is not malfunctioning.

When something is on the run it is not standing still.

When giving someone a run for their money it is not letting them win.

I guess I lack poetic imagination because that is the best I can come up with.  I find some of these topics on the discussion board to be difficult.  While I could see how this would be a helpful tool in writing, I am more of a person that would tell you what something is and not what it is not.