Adding first draft

I have feedback from my instructor for the first draft in the first attachment. please read carefully what is needed.

The requirement for the 20 sources:

1-  Header.

2-  General overview.

3-  Topic problem.

4-  3 quotes or paraphrase or summary.

In citation use maker quotation  “-----“(numbers or name)

5-  Interpretative commentary.

6-  Unique contribution of source.

7-  Compare contrast 2 sources that are the collection.

For number 4 and 5 use like this example:

A-  quotes or 3 paraphrase or 3 summary.

B-  Interpretative commentary

 Do it three times .^^^^ like above .

You used number 1, 2, and 7

And you didn’t use number 3, 4, 5, and 6