5 pages writing - in the next 4 hours please - its a revision

I need someone who has a good command to assist me in this essay redo

Just avoid if you cannot meet the deadline please

Instructions: Please see attachment for full instructions and rubric.  Also, for the two works cited, they need to be longer than 500 words and available in full text format.  Please also note the requirement to identify the changes from last weeks essay which I attached.  My position is that colleges should focus more on the academia than the consumerism and making college a fun place.  That there should not be such a power struggle.

Number of Pages: 5 Pages