Write a persuasive resume for the attached job.

Student A. Resume 1000 Spring Garden Drive

Greensboro, NC 27215 336.XXX.XXXX abcdefg@uncg.edu

Objective Job title at Company X

Education

The University of North Carolina at Greensboro Bachelor of Science in Business Administration

December 2011

Related Courses: Management, Communications, Economics, Mathematics, Accounting, Finance, Marketing, English, Information Systems Management

Customer Service Experience

Southbound Sandwich Works, Burlington NC Cook/Cashier/Manager February 2004 – October 2007

 Learned basic co-worker relations, as well as basic fundamentals for strong work ethic.

 Developed basic public relation skills.

 Responsible for reports, inventory, currency, employee hours, employee schedules, and employee conflict.

 Learned how to run a business at a young age, and manage conflict efficiently. TastyServing Grill, Greensboro NC Server October 2007 – January 2009

 Developed public speaking skills.  Received countless hours of public relations.  Expanded communication skills.  Increased co-worker relation skills.  Advanced responsibility and accountability.  Growth of accuracy.  Multiple “employee of month” awards.

Server, Outback Steakhouse, Greensboro NC , January 2009 – Present

 Fine tuned public relations skills.

 Extensive people skills.

 Extensive public speaking abilities.

 Matured accuracy of communication.

 Cordial and extremely polite.

 Increased patience, reliability, initiative.

 Multiple performance awards.

Skills

Comment [h1]: Be sure your name has the ‘right’ balance – not too big or small. Too big = arrogance, too little = under-confident

Comment [h2]: Made smaller – info not persuasive

Comment [h3]: Pursuing an occupation in marketing.

Comment [h4]: Delete (UNCG) Greensboro, NC

Comment [h5]: Bold your degree not where you got it from

Comment [h6]: No value to reader - instead… Concentration: Business Studies

Comment [h7]: Don’t underline – it’s clutter Indent under Ed

Comment [h8]: redo

Comment [h9]: Feb – use three letters for all dates

Comment [h10]: Bullets are about your contribution not what you received!

Comment [h11]: Bullets to one line Why are the bullets so different from here and then below?

Comment [h12]: Bold the job titles

Comment [h13]: Takes up too much valuation space like this

Comment [h14]: Again, bullets are to be about what you contribute NOT what you received.

Comment [h15]: What does this mean?

Comment [h16]: Detail when and what the achievement was – no blanket statements

Comment [h17]: Redo like this for persuasion

Comment [h18]: These are about what you’ve received (mostly). The bullets are to be about your contribution

Comment [h19]: No claim – tell the specifics.

Comment [h20]: Again, a claim. Vague and abstract

Communication Computer: Microsoft Office 2007 (Word, Excel, PowerPoint) Public Relations Language: Spanish (read and speak partially) Reliability Professionalism References: Available upon Request

Comment [h21]: Resume is facts not opinion

Comment [h22]: Not attractive Conversational?

Comment [h23]: NO ** References available upon request**