do edition on my own essays

Since there is no school on Monday, February 17th because of 'Presidents Day', I do hope you spend some time revising some of your posts to include specific examples that are based on your great ideas. Some students are too general and do not 'show' the reader exactly why or how or to what extent or the effects on the self, the community and/or a country. THINK, READ, and WRITE to get the grades you deserve. Please read chapter three in your book, "The Religious Heritage of the United States: Strengthening American Cultural Values". Take notes in your notebook or write in your book.

Write at least one full page (12font) or more on what is really a 'myth or reality' based on the following quote: "These six cultural values--individual freedom, self-reliance, equality of opportunity, competition, material wealth, and hard work--...form the basic structure...of the American culture" (37). Discuss how some of these values may be just a 'dream' or myth or a reality if certain conditions apply. In other words, do Americans experience 'equal opportunities' or not compared to your country? To what extent are Americans 'free'? Write what you feel strongly about but present your examples to show what you mean.

Discuss religious

According to American history that we know the class system does exist in United States. Poor people have not right and money, rich people have right and money is its main characteristic, so they have different ideal about life until people believe religious.

Before people have not any religious, American had divided into two part. the first part that was poor people lived together, and had same work like worker, also had same ideal like poor people could’t be a rich people, if they could earned much mony to keep their family that’s enough. It’s same with rich people who had good job and wanted to got much money to improve their family. In my opinion, money and right are not most important, the most important thing is thought. Even if mony and right can improve living quality, but can’t improve yourself. The result is people had not dream, they just try to lived in every day especially for poor people. Rich people had money, then they could did something what they wanted, they could buy good clothes, eat nice food. They had many thing had to do, almost rich people did not need to another thing to filled up they life, so they enjoyed life. Poor people had not dream, they wanted to found somebody who may help them, but it was impossible, so they were unhappy.

After American had a religious, people had a big change whether poor people or rich people. Some part of people who still were poor people, they change their mind after they had religious. People know money and right were not most important, enjoy life is better than anything from religious. They did’t care someone who could help them because religious would help them, belief would lead to them did what they wanted to do. Rich people also had some change, religious could gave them different ideal, help them enjoyed different life.

So i think dream is a best distinction between people have religious or have not. Most religious is good for people, because it can help people face to difficulty, give people some ideal to do what they want to do.