Role Model

I have a draft talking about my role model.

I need a 5 paragraphs essay 3-5 sentences per paragraph.

A person who not only opened doors for me but also serves me as a role model is Joel, my manager. I used to work in Perry Ellis, a retail store, where I found myself very comfortable. One day, I was working, and a guy came to the store and I decided to help him. When he came to check out, he told me he was very pleased with they way I helped him, and to my surprise, he offered me a job at Zales, a jewelry store, where he is the manager. I was happy at my current job, but I was also interested in his offer since I saw better opportunities to gain money. I then started working with him, and noticed I really look up him because at just 25 years old, he is in charge of the entire store, and that inspires me to work even harder.