Revise My Essay

marmaster2010

It is due at 10 pm PST.

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Comments for modification: " Remove yourself from the story. Make the story from her perspective, not yours. Remove anything about this being an interview or an essay and just tell her story, not how you learned about her story. "


Please help add me add some of her detailed thoughts (anything you think it works fine.)


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