Review the project and comment

I have included, as attached, a copy of the project. Please review and comment back in word, that I might consider your inputs against the team's efforts. As in a case study, I am looking to find a decisive set of comments that are to the point and illustrate your ability to consider the work of other's. As a step in maturity, these are conditions that would be expected of a Master's level graduate that is tasked with running the team. I will take all into consideration but retain the final decision on the team grade.