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Intro/thesis workshop discussion

Directions:

After working offline (i.e. don't compose directly into the discussion post--copy and paste!), post your intro paragraph--. The format won't be correct, but that's OK; we're just looking at your content, trying to get a sense of the direction your argument will take. 

Please check the video below and write a intro/thesis. ( 160words)

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8DyYh0mkyzg