prof macqueen

 Hey Eray, you did not follow the directions for the detailed outline, so I cannot give you feedback on your outline.  Specifically: 1. Your outline is not organized, 2. You have questions for main points which is unacceptable, and 3. Your focus is off. You need to focus on your argument/thesis and make sure everything always relates back to your focus! You also need some academic research to back up your arguments. (See Research Process Folder feedback).  Please take a look at the direct comments for some feedback however.

Dr. Karen Carlisi, Nov 19 at 4:40pmI used Google Scholar to do a quick search and found some very good peer-reviewed academic journal articles on your topic! You need to put more effort into looking at the research into WHY revoking DACA would be so harmful. Some possible keywords: deportation of undocumented college students 

 Eray, you have clearly made some progress in your research, as demonstrated in your folder. However, you still do not have two peer-reviewed academic journal articles, and you do not have the required research NOTECARDS in your folder. You are researching a very recent problem, but the problem must have an earlier research base. To solve your research article gap, (especially because your detailed outline is still incomplete), you need to think about how to BUILD your argument for your paper so that you have a REASON for arguing about DACA at all. I'm sure you could find some research that shows the damaging, psychological effects of removing people forcefully from the country they grew up in. Perhaps try these keywords: negative effects of deportation?