Paragraph Writing

Paragraph Writing—Greatest Success: Draft 2

In this assignment, you will revise the paragraph you initially submitted in M1: Assignment 3 to include a description of at least one obstacle to your success and how you overcame it.

In your revision:

• Expand on the length of your paragraph by describing at least one obstacle to your success and how you overcame it. Your paragraph should now be 200 words long.
• Ensure that you do not have any run-on sentences or comma errors in your paragraph.
• Address comments from your instructor on your first draft.