intro-conclution

REMEMBER THE THESIS is always the last sentence in the HOOK INtro Paragraph

Personal advertisements for dates, dating services, and internet chat lines are just a few examples that show how many people are lonely. Somepeople might meet someone through services such as these, while others may not.

THESIS: There are several things people who are lonely can do to make their lives fulfilling.

Remember the THESIS IS THE LAST SENTENCE IN THE INTRO PARAGRAGH

• Questions
• Story
• Comparison
• Imaginary story
• Quotation

Transitional Expression 

First

  Major Supporting Detail  1     Friends/family  

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Transitional Expression 

Second   

 Major Supporting detail  2     Have Goals

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Transitional Expression 

Then

Major Supporting detail 3   Keep Growing  

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                                           2

CONCLUSION