Explicator-style essay

 i already wrote two pages of the Essay, i just want you to expanded my ideas and add more examples to get it to 7 pages. This is the website of the story: http://www.greathill.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/Story-Carver-Why-Dont-You-Dance.pdf and there is a movie called Everything Must Go. I put an example of how the essay should look like in the attachment and I also put my two pages.