Essay

  Here are the areas that need improvement and revisions on this essay:

3. Is there an introduction for each source the first time the source is used in the essay? (Ex: Sarah James, writer for The New York Times, states, “….”) If not, state which source(s) need an introduction.  

-No, paragraph 1, 4, and 6.

5. Does each body paragraph include at least one cited quote and one cited paraphrase? If not, state which body paragraph(s) need additional cited research. 

-No, paragraph 1-8 only have a quote or a cite not both.  

7. Is there a smooth transition to the counterargument section, and is the counterargument section about one page long? 

-Which paragraph is the counter argument and it is not a page long.

11. Is the essay formatted using correct MLA format from beginning to end, including the Works Cited page (You must double-check the format using the sample essay and other elements of the OWL Purdue MLA website)? 

-Please verify formatting and citations, here is the link to check: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/mla_style/mla_formatting_and_style_guide/documents/20190822MLASamplePaper.pdf