Data science program admissions essay (CPP=300)

 Hi, I′ve applied to this program before but I got rejected. I think part of it is because of my poor SOP. Can you help me write a new one? I am attaching my previous essay so you can reference my personal experience. The skill sets of me that I want to emphasize are (but are not limited to; please don′t hesitate to add on or exclude): - Strong analytical skills/quantitative reasoning/problem-solving skills - Client-facing experience with outstanding communication skills - Proficiency in general programming languages (SQL, Python, C++…) - Strong mathematical background: Major in Chemical engineering & Minor in computational & applied mathematics - Competent & strive to be better: have been attending Georgia Tech Analytics Micro-master program for two semesters while working full time