Cybersecurity

                                                   CASE STUDY (MICROSOFT)

GROUP BEHIND ALLEGED RUSSIA HACK BROKE INTO MICROSOFT'S INTERNAL SYSTEMS OR ANY OTHER CYBER ATTACK ON MICROSOFT.

 Please enter the name of the organization you selected for your case study papers. Please do not select an 

organization someone has already selected. It is in three drafts and it should be six to eight pages.

NO PLAGIARISM AND WITH REFERENCES HOWEVER THE THE GUIDELINES TO THE WORK OR ASSIGNMENT IS EMBEDDED IN THE UPLOAD FILE.

This is going to be corrected version based on this feedback from the other peer group

1. Regarding your preventative measures, I think you should elaborate more on different methods organizations can implement to limit future attacks such as the SolarWinds Compromise. For example, organizations with endpoint-detection agents installed typically were not impacted. This could indicate that EDR capabilities could detect most of the follow-on persistence mechanisms leveraged by the adversary. Additionally, organzations should invest in holistic threat management processes in order to mitigate both third-party and Nation-State threats. Perhaps some thoughts here would really drive your case study home for readers.

Great paper and I look forward to your final product!

2.  I think this was a great paper. i finished feeling well-informed of a new topic. The only change I would really suggest would be to structure your topics slightly different. For example, maybe make the conclusion its own page istead of starting at the end of page 8. Otherwise, I think you have a great start to your paper.