Writing Tasks for Diagnostic Essay of Expressing an Opinion
Running Head: EXPRESSING AN OPINION 1
EXPRESSING AN OPINION 2
Expressing an Opinion
Christopher Ziffra
ENG101 – Composition I
Colorado State University – Global Campus
Dr. Anne Carlisle
February 15, 2021
Expressing an Opinion
Whether to enroll in college immediately after high school or to take a gap before college is a good question that different people have discussed in various ways. Every individual has a different opinion in response to the asked question. However, debates about the same have been held by students in institutions and other concerned parties. Therefore, from the reactions, the gap years are seemingly more sensible. Ideally, most people rush to making the transition to higher learning immediately after high school. Research explains that most of those who rush are influenced by peer groups, while others are rushed by their parents or guardians.
On the other hand, some students take time and work for a year or more than that, as others use the gap to travel. Working and traveling have merits, although it has demerits too. The demerits include some of those who get to work immediately after high school never get back for studies (Stephens et al., 2012).
Besides, what one does with the gap is what matters most. There are several advantages for a student to opt for taking time before attending college. The benefits will make the student not only an all-rounded person but also an improved student in the following way.
First, taking a gap will make the learner do better in university. Student excellence, in this case, will be effective due to many reasons. For example, the student will take studies more seriously because they know how the world has to offer; therefore, one will see the value of being serious with the education imposed on persons by the community and education's essentiality. For example, education makes a person be marketable and uphold the sense of humanity.
Secondly, a student gets time to contemplate. The gap year provides an opportunity for the learner to realize their capabilities, passion, and areas of strength. Therefore, the student gets to know what course they should go for (Goldenberg, 2013). Many students who rush to colleges and higher learning institutions do not figure out what they like and what they want to undertake in college. They realize they made wrong choices when it is too late. Hence, they either go back to school to enroll in their career courses or stick to that particular course. This indecisiveness is too costly and time-consuming, therefore, to avoid it, students should take a break before joining higher institution learning.
Additionally, making connections is essential in life. When a student stays out of school for that given period, for various reasons, his or her social networks enable him to have life-time friends, unlike the case of those who join universities immediately after high school. In most cases, school friendship never lasts; the bond fades up with time after completing studies. Making friends out of school is not circumstantial, and it enables a student to have connections while out of school, in school, and in life after school. Having this kind of friends can bear good fruits in a student's future, for they can end up being business partners.
Through traveling and adventure, a student gains experience of what the world bears. Witnessing what the world can give through exploration provides proficiency and enough experience. There is much to discover before a person makes a transition to university. For instance, paying a visit to new places can give a student ideas of where their careers can fit, and at the same time, be able to understand the sense of humanity.
Moreover, taking a gap before joining the university provides a platform for a person to do constructive things to build their career. For example, when someone engages in charity work in the community, sports and games, and other hobbies. As a result, they stand a chance to be considered by employers in the job market. Those are some of the factors considered in employment qualifications. Volunteering implicates hard work and commitment to making the world a better place; for example, cleaning the environment and paying visits to the needy, and helping them.
Furthermore, according to Johan (Johan et al., 2019), a gap year enhances independence in a person. Everyone yearns for independence. The exposure one can acquire from utilizing the gap yea before joining higher learning enables the student to know how to manage funds and also be able to make plans on your own. Without this gap, many students take too long to be independent, especially those who immediately transit to college. Learning to be independent enhances responsibility while in college and life after school.
Conclusion
There is plenty that one can learn in a year. In taking a gap after high school, a student can acquire more life skills, including learning how to draw, cook, and public communication. A student can also learn a new language; therefore, there is a need for the gap year, as discussed above.
References
Goldenberg, C. (2013). Unlocking the Research on English Learners: What We Know--and Don't Yet Know--about Effective Instruction. American Educator, 37(2), 4.
Johan, N., Sadler-Smith, E., & Tribe, J. (2019). Informal and incidental learning in the liminal space of extended independent (gap-year) travel. Academy of Management Learning & Education, 18(3), 388-413.
Stephens, N. M., Fryberg, S. A., Markus, H. R., Johnson, C. S., & Covarrubias, R. (2012). Unseen disadvantage: How American universities' focus on independence undermines the academic performance of first-generation college students: Journal of personality and social psychology, 102(6), 1178.