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As part of the second week of the new tutor training.docx

As part of the second week of the new tutor training, we would like you to undertake a grading exercise. This requires that you review, grade, and feedback on two examples of real student work, using our grading criteria, to demonstrate your understanding of the content covered during new tutor training (NTT).

Grading exercise details

Below are two student responses to an assessed piece of work.

This particular assignment has been taken from an old version of our Fundamentals of Effective Learning (FEL) module, following two units (weeks) of learning which have focussed on online research.

Before attempting to mark the student work, please read the following document which provides some context for this exercise and an example of tutor feedback against a different assignment. You should use this to influence your response to the task.

Assignment Guidance

The question that students were required to answer:

"Identify three online sites that you will use for your wider reading on this course. Using your understanding of how to evaluate online resources, explain why the sites that you have chosen are credible and reliable to use for academic work. Your report must include 2 relevant quotations, accurately referenced from 2 sources accessed via the Kaplan e-library (a journal or a book) that you actively engage with.

Please refer to the Referencing Guidelines as part of the report writing process. Your report should be between 600 and 1000 words."

Here are the student submissions:

· Student 1

· Student 2

Grading exercise instructions

To complete this exercise, please apply the assessment criteria available below and mark the papers accordingly. You should complete the Business Feedback Template provided for each of the two student submissions, giving feedback relating to each area of the criteria. Feel free to annotate the submissions if you feel this would be helpful.

Grading Criteria

Excel Gradebook Template

Business Feedback Template

Please complete the MMA tab of the Excel Gradebook by entering the grading breakdown for each element of the criteria in the relevant cell, along with the Business Feedback Template for each submission with your feedback.

The feedback that you write for this exercise should be aimed at the student and you would normally transfer this into Moodle for students to access.

Please note: if a submission goes outside of the word count, the 10 percentage points should not be deducted within the excel gradebook; instead the final mark for this submission would be adjusted and justified within the feedback sheet.

Submission Instructions:

· Remember to include your name in the finished documents

· Submit via the portal below

Business Grading Exercise - Excel Gradebook.xlsx

Summary

Module Gradebook
Course Code FEL
Tutor's Name
Student Adviser Surname Firstname Support Need Support Need 2 D1-2 MMA D5-6 JR EoMP Total Grade
10 30 10 20 30 %
XXX Student 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 NCF
XXX Student 2 0 0 0 0 0 0 NCF
XXX Student 3 0 0 0 0 0 0 NCF
XXX Student 4 0 0 0 0 0 0 NCF
XXX Student 5 0 0 0 0 0 0 NCF

D1-2

Discussion 1 & 2 Grades
Postings & Understanding Application Summary Post Animation Grade
Weighting 25% 25% 25% 25% %
Surname Firstname Comments
Student 1 0 0
Student 2 0 0
Student 3 0 0
Student 4 0 0
Student 5 0 0

MMA

Mid-module Assignment Grades
Presentation, organisation and use of English Relevance Understanding of the relevant module materials Additional reading and/or application of workplace Critical discussion & synthesis of ideas / reading Grade
Weighting 20% 20% 20% 20% 20% %
Surname Firstname
Student 1 0 0
Student 2 0 0
Student 3 0 0
Student 4 0 0
Student 5 0 0

D5-6

Discussion 5 & 6 Grades
Postings & Understanding Application Summary Post Animation Grade
Weighting 25% 25% 25% 25% %
Surname Firstname Comments
Student 1 0 0
Student 2 0 0
Student 3 0 0
Student 4 0 0
Student 5 0 0

JR

Journal Report Grades
Presentation Summary of Personal learning Demonstration of Module Engagement Reflective Content & Application of Learning Grade
Weighting 20% 20% 20% 40% %
Surname Firstname Comments
Student 1 0 0
Student 2 0 0
Student 3 0 0
Student 4 0 0
Student 5 0 0

EoMP

End of Module Project Grades
Presentation Assignment Coverage Understanding of Materials Additional Reading and/or WB Application Critical Discussion & Synthesis Grade
Weighting 20% 20% 20% 20% 20% %
Surname Firstname
Student 1 0 0
Student 2 0 0
Student 3 0 0
Student 4 0 0
Student 5 0 0

Grading Criteria.pdf

Characteristics of student achievement per mark band →

70%+ 60-69% 50-59% 40-49% 0-39%

Assessment criteria

Indicative Weighting

Work of a distinguished quality

Work of a commendable category

Sound work

Broadly satisfactory work

Work that falls short of the threshold standards

Presentation, organisation and use of English

20%

Outstanding level of presentation, faultless use of English grammar & syntax

Good level of presentation, good use of English grammar & syntax

Acceptable level of presentation, a few minor faults in use of English

Understandable level of presentation although lacking care. Several minor faults or a few more serious faults in use of English

Non-submission or Poor presentation, badly organised, weak communication in written English

Relevance

20%

Clear and insightful attention paid to all aspects of the assignment

Attention paid to all parts of the assignment

Acceptable attempt to answer all elements of the answer question.

Some attempt to answer the question but some elements of the answer weak or omitted

Non submission. Fails to answer significant proportion of the question

Understanding of the relevant module materials

20%

Full understanding of relevant parts of the standard module materials

Good understanding of relevant parts of the standard module materials

A competent (if dependent or incomplete) understanding of the module materials.

Some limited evidence of understanding the standard module materials

No evidence of understanding the standard module materials – or evidence of having misunderstood them

Additional reading and/or application of workplace experience

20%

Demonstration of a wide range of additional reading/ web research and/or, insightful application of workplace experience to the assignment

Demonstration of some additional reading/web research and/or some application of workplace experience to the assignment

Some application of workplace experience to the assignment and/or some evidence of additional reading

Neither evidence of relevant additional reading, or unconvincing application of workplace experience

No evidence of relevant additional reading and/or no application of workplace experience

Critical discussion & synthesis of ideas / reading

20%

Convincing critical discussion of ideas/readings/workplace experience, indicates a strong capacity to analyse and synthesise ideas

Competent critical discussion of ideas/readings/workplace experience. Shows some capacity to analyse and synthesise ideas

Presents an outline of a critical discussion of ideas/readings/workplace experience.

Weak discussion of ideas/readings/workplace experience. Presents some elements of an appropriate argument

No evidence of critical discussion/synthesis of ideas/workplace experience

Undergraduate Mid-Module Assignment and End of Module Project Grading Criteria

Tutor training Student 1 (1).doc

Online Research

Identify three online sites that are relevant to your degree subject, and that you might use for your wider reading on this course. Using your understanding of the reading in unit 6, on evaluating online resources, explain why the sites that you have chosen are credible and reliable to use for academic work.

Name: Student 1

Module: Tutor Training

Tutor:

Submission Date:

Academic Integrity Statement: I have read and understood the Academic Integrity guidelines for Kaplan Open Learning and the University Of Essex, and declare that this assignment conforms to all of the rules and regulations contained therein.

Please note: the guidelines can be found in the Student Handbook (see section 6.4)

Introduction

This report explores steps students should take and factors to be considered when determining how credible a website’s information is when it comes to academic researching. A high percentage of students today use the internet for research. Using untrustworthy information, will lead to erroneous knowledge on a topic.

As a student of The University of Essex Online studying towards a BA (Hons) Business and Management degree, I will need to engage in research constantly and doing so online proves to be the most convenient method for me at present. In order for me to filter and use reliable sources, there are certain factors which I must consider. Below, I analyse and determine how credible and reliable the sources are from three websites which are relevant to my subject of study. These websites do not only relate to Business and management specifically, but act as a bank to credible information covering modules which do relate the subject.

Evaluating research source

To ensure I use only credible sources when researching, there are guidelines in place to help me to determine whether a source is believable or not. There is a guideline called the “CARS checklist” and another called the “CAFE advice”.

The CARS checklist advices “Credibility, Accuracy, Reasonableness, Support...is designed to provide some criteria for assessing the quality of a source, whether it is print or online. Few sources will meet every criterion in the list, and even those that do may not possess the highest level of quality possible. But if you learn to use the criteria in this list to critically evaluate the material you are reading, you will be much better able to separate the high-quality information from the poor quality” (Richmond.ac.uk, 2010)

The CAFE advice recommends we further challenge, adapt, file and evaluate sources. I am going to apply the CARS checklist to three websites and analyse each factor to help me to determine whether or not these website provide information trustworthy enough for me to use as part of my studies.

1.www.library.Kaplan.edu

Kaplan University Online Library website

Creditability- This website is an information bank which I believe provides trustworthy information as it is published by a university, which is a respected organisation. The site offers help in various forms for finding information.

Accuracy- The sources are all dated and the website is reviewed frequently as the date shows alongside the source. The information presented by this website show full comprehensiveness. Although it is recommended students use more than one source for researching, the information provided covers the topic fully. The source provided by the website is aimed at students or an adult at high education and above therefore is appropriate for me.

Reasonableness- The website shows a sign of fairness as it contains a vast amount of non biased information.

Support- The site’s sources are all fully referenced with some citations available. There are several modes of making contact listed and the facility of online chat with a librarian is also available.

2. www.ipl.org

Ipl2 ‘Information you can trust’ website

Creditability- Background information is provided on the site telling us where the website gets its sources. The website merges information from the Internet Public Library (IPL) and librarians’ Internet Index (LII) website and is hosted by two universities. This gives me confidence that the information provided is likely to be credible before looking at the other factors to determine overall creditability.

Accuracy- It is easy to search for information and when looking at a particular link from a list of search results for example, ‘Business Studies’ the information provided is fully referenced and makes it easy to verify the accuracy of the source. In some other results, full information is also provided on the author.

Reasonableness- As the website acts as an information bank; it appears to be none biased and does not show any evidence of conflict of interest. The search results I looked into covered the topics reasonably and did not give one-sided information.

Support- The site provides appropriate referencing for all of its sources. The registered address is listed and other methods of staying connected to the site through additional methods like face book and twitter are also provided under the ‘contact us’ tab.

3 .www.sloanreview.mit.edu

MIT Sloan Management Review website

Creditability- Each article provided clearly states author(s) and the date the article was written. Methods of contacting the website such as the site’s e-mail address, telephone number through face book, twitter and LinkedIn are all provided.

Accuracy- According to the dates listed on the site of when sources were provided, they all appear to be up to date. This is a good indication of how accurate the information is.

Reasonableness- The information I have viewed on this website appears to be non-biased and is concerned with the truth. The views are definitely not one- sided.

Support- The site has an ‘About Us’ section which clearly states their goals and the origin of their source materials “We distribute our content on the web, in print and on mobile and portable platforms, as well as via licensees and libraries around the world” (sloanreview.mit.edu, 1977- 2013). There is also a list of their frequently used authors.

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Conclusion

This report has proved that there are several factors which need to be considered to determine whether a source found online is credible. Although I have looked closely at one method, it is vital a student learns how to filter credible sources from the vast amount of information offered on the internet. Upon evaluating the three websites mentioned in this report, I feel they provide me with credible and reliable information for my academic use.

List of References

Richmond.ac.uk (2010) The CARS checklist. Online at http://www.richmond.ac.uk/content/library/information-literacy/the-cars-checklist.aspx [accessed 18 January 2013]

Sloanreview.mit.edu (1977- 2013) About Us. Online at http://sloanreview.mit.edu/about/ [accessed 21 January 2013]

Bibliography

Library.kaplan.edu (2004- 2012) Kaplan Online Library. Online at http://library.kaplan.edu/content.php?pid=150035 [accessed 19 January 2013]

Ipl2.org (2012) About ipl2. Online at http://www.ipl.org/div/about/ [accessed 20 January 2013]

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Tutor Training Student 2 (1).doc

Evaluating Online Information and Resources

Name: Student 2

Module: Tutor Training

Tutor:

Submission Date:

Academic Integrity Statement: I have read and understood the Academic Integrity guidelines for Kaplan Open Learning and the University Of Essex, and declare that this assignment conforms to all of the rules and regulations contained therein.

Please note: the guidelines can be found in the Student Handbook (see section 6.4)

Introduction

The internet provides a vast continuum of information available at your fingertips, and with more and more people turning to commercial search engines such as Google to assist with researching everything from health issues and food recipes to scholarly journals on quantum physics; the more traditional methods of research, such as hard copy books, are fast becoming outmoded as it is hard to compete with the handiness of the internet, as Downes (2007) describes:

“A person using Google does not obtain information from a centralized source; rather, by typing a search term into the simple interface on the main page, users obtain information from anywhere around the world, from any of tens of millions of sources.” (Downes, 2007)

This shift in research preference, aptly named the ‘Google Generation’ by a number of journalists, does come with its risks however. Information can be placed on the internet by anyone, therefore it is important to acknowledge that not all information is necessarily correct and true, and the quality will range from being very good to very bad.

This report aims to inform students of the importance of evaluating online information when carrying out research to ensure it is credible, accurate and supported, before using it as supporting information to their thesis.

‘Knowledge is power’

In order to carry out effective research, a student must first appreciate the benefit of assessing the integrity of information in order to decide how or if it should be used in their work; Harris (2010) comments on how the power of knowledge is only obtained through reliable material:

“Information serves as the basis for beliefs, decisions, choices, and understanding our world. If we make a decision based on wrong or unreliable information, we do not have power -- we have defeat.” (Harris, 2010)

Effective searching

Adopting effective search techniques will keep the research focused and ensure that time is not lost by reviewing page upon page of irrelevant or poor information.

Prior to searching, a ‘pre-evaluation’ should be carried out by the student to establish what information they hope to find and why they need it, this will help to keep the results specific and the research focused.

It is also advisable that students have bias towards utilising sources which have been endorsed by well-known organisations such as Universities, the Government and corporate entities, which can include online databases, libraries and articles which are likely to have been peer reviewed prior to being published and can be deemed credible.

Evaluation techniques

In a report published by The Guardian, Wallace (n.d.) discusses how the ‘Google Generation’ lacks the basic skills required to conduct effective online research:

“Students of all ages need to learn to make independent assessments of the quality of material by looking at the authors' experience, funders, use of sources, and where published.” (Wallace, n.d.)

There are a number of guides which can assist students through the process of evaluation, such as the ‘CARS Checklist’, the ‘CAFÉ Advice’ and the ‘Internet Detective’ website.

Harris (2010) explains the ‘CARS Checklist’ in detail on his website, Virtual Salt; the acronym ‘CARS’ stands for Credibility, Accuracy, Reasonableness and Support. The checklist assists the student to carry out structured evaluation of information and sources which are being considered for use in research. The ‘CARS Checklist’ is explained further below:

Credibility

When assessing credibility, the student should ultimately be asking whether or not the source is trustworthy; therefore it is important to ascertain who the author is, including their experience, reputation and social standing, and also whether or not the information has been peer reviewed as part of a quality control process.

Accuracy

It is essential that information that is to be used in research is accurate to ensure the thesis can be taken seriously. The degree of accuracy can be determined by: checking the date of which the information was created, assessing how comprehensive the writer has been in order to come to their conclusions (i.e. acknowledgment of opposing arguments), and also ensuring there is a clear view of how the writer sourced their information by carrying out additional evaluation.

Reasonableness

Good information should be written fairly, without the writer pushing his own biases on the reader; therefore, an appraisal should be carried out focusing on how equitable the writer has been with regards to taking other views into consideration, how realistic the information is (perhaps simply based on personal experience), and whether or not the writer is consistent in their argument.

Support

It is extremely important to understand how a writer has obtained his information and with what information his statements and arguments are supported by; for example, checking which sources have been cited and whether or not there is corroboration elsewhere which can confirm that the information is realistic and true.

Putting Evaluation into Practice

Example No.1 – www.biz/ed.co.uk

Biz/ed is a website which is owned by CENAGE, a reputable organisation which produces educational material. The ‘About Us’ page includes information about the websites ‘Content Developers’, explaining that they have over 30 years’ experience in the educational field and actively encourage feedback to ensure the content of the website is up to date.

The target audience is students and teachers in the post-16 education sector, offering support for subjects including economics, business and marketing. The website hosts a wealth of information, and also contact details are provided for students to raise individual queries.

Biz/ed was also cited on BBC’s Business Studies website, which provides additional comfort that the site is credible as one would assume that the BBC has carried out a vetting process.

Example No.2 – www.businessballs.com

Businessballs is a learning and development resource. The site is run by Alan Chapman, and although there is not a great deal of background information which supports his experience, his name is positively mentioned on other websites, and the businessballs website is cited as being a useful resource.

The content of the website is mainly a collection of ideas, and includes an honest statement that the concept is ‘experimental’; therefore although the content is not necessarily supported by links to other sources, the ideas are realistic when assessed against personal experience and can still be considered useful when studying business theories.

Example No.3 – www.mydonut.co.uk

Mydonut is a collection of websites which individually focus on: Business Startup, I.T., Law, Marketing and Tax; which aim to provide small and medium sized enterprises with reliable information and resources to help them succeed. This includes: how-to guides, expert Q&A’s, events, case studies etc.

The Donut sites are produced by BHP Information Solutions who are reputable, well established marketing agency with a portfolio of high profile clients.

The information held on these websites has been created by bringing together the knowledge of reputable business men and women who have been deemed to be ‘experts’ in their field, all of whom can be contacted separately with individual queries or requests for support.

The news feed on each of the websites includes up to date and relevant information, including links and acknowledgment of the sources used.

Conclusion

Understanding the benefits of evaluating information which has been sourced on the internet helps to determine whether or not it should be used as part of our research. The risks of not carrying out such evaluation range from plagiarism (as sources have not been cited correctly), to part of thesis being deemed irrelevant as the information that it has been based on is either incorrect or heavily biased.

Currently, evaluation of online information is predominantly the responsibility of the searcher and therefore some degree of education should really be compulsory to ensure the pitfalls of unreliable information are avoided. Friedman (2005) makes a valid point regarding the lack automated assistance when evaluating online information:

“Whereas there are many sophisticated kinds of software available to help the average user filter out offensive sites, no such product exists to screen out unreliable sites.” (Friedman, 2005: 156)

By having a process, such as the ‘CARS Checklist’, the evaluation of information is made easier and can be utilised as either a quick or thorough check to establish whether or not the information will be useful; for example by evaluating the three websites using these guidelines, it is clear that they all have reputable backgrounds, and it is safe to assume that much of their content will have gone through some degree of editorial review and therefore safe to use.

List of References

Downes, S 2007, 'Places to Go: Google's Search Results for "Net Generation"', Innovate: Journal Of Online Education. Online via the Kaplan Online Library http://search.ebscohost.com.lib.kaplan.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ843384&site=eds-live [accessed 21 January 2013]

Friedman, B (2005: 156) Web Search Savvy : Strategies And Shortcuts For Online Research, n.p.: Online via the Kaplan Online Library at http://search.ebscohost.com.lib.kaplan.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=nlebk&AN=119259&site=ehost-live [accessed 21 January 2013]

Harris, R (2010) Evaluating Internet Research Sources. Online at http://www.virtualsalt.com/evalu8it.htm [accessed 17 January 2013]

Wallace, W (n.d) Information Alert. Online at http://education.guardian.co.uk/librariesunleashed/story/0,,2274796,00.html [accessed 20 January 2013]

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UoEO NTT Business Feedback Template.docx

Student number/name

Module Code:

FEL

Tutor Name:

TOTAL MARK:

Presentation, organisation and use of English (20%):

Relevance (20%):

Understanding of the relevant module materials (20%):

Additional reading and/or application of workplace (20%):

Critical discussion & synthesis of ideas / reading (20%):

Overall comments

Positives:

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Points for development:

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Feedback for NTT Business

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