Section 1) I'm not sure of this issue in light of global health. What is prevalence of this problem globally or cross-culturally? What populations are affected? Section 2) There is lots of evidence here about disparities in women but very little about the theoretical approach at all which is the point of this entire section Section 3) You really needed to tackle this from both a public health and policy approach. I hear about the public health programs but what about policy? Finally: Title and cover page would make better organization.