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Writing.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

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Writing.docx PAGE 1

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article a.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains an error or misspelling that makes your meaning unclear.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Garbled This sentence contains several grammatical or spelling errors that make your meaning unclear. Proofread the sentence to identify and fix the mistakes.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

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