Week 4 team assignment

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Good job completing the Industry Overview assignment. APA writing standards were followed concerning including the cover page and references page. However, be sure to properly format references, use credible sources, and include headings. Also, missing end quotation mark in 5th paragraph. You shared your thoughts in the 575 words (the count range was 525-700 - cover page and reference page are not included in word count). 

Requirements for this assignment included explaining distribution and the sales chain, customer experience, inventory, cash flow system, pricing, etc. Understanding these areas of business can contribute to increase profitability, low costs, and reduced inventories, all of which can lead to customer satisfaction. Your thoughts were organized and paragraphs detailed with good sentence structure. Grammar and mechanics were effectively demonstrated. Content on distribution, sales chain, and inventory were informative and explained business plans. However, no discussion on manufacturing, may or may not apply but not mentioned. Good illustration on pricing and sales strategies, which are essential to any organization and can lead to sustainability. Overall great job!