essay, assignment questions
Tara,Because you did not earn a passing grade on this assignment, you may revise it. Before you revise your assignment, please make sure you read my in-text comments and understand what is needed. If you have any questions, please contact me. In addition, make sure you contact me once you submit your assignment so I know it is ready for grading. This short-answer essay was designed to test students' knowledge of some of the key themes from the week. You were also asked to apply some of this information to some real-world self-disclosure experience.These responses did not quite meet the expectations. Remember, students were required to answer all elements of the prompt and use course material for all these responses. First, many times you did not do all of the required elements. Second, though these responses might have been influenced by class readings, it was not clear and/or deep enough discussion of key themes from class. I needed to see much more engagement with course themes to illustrate deeper understanding. For instance, in your reply to the question about defining and describing one principle of rapport, you described three principles instead of discussion one in detail. Also, the required text support was not needed. To improve, remember to review the rubric to see if you must use and cite the text in your response. While I saw some attempt to demonstrate understanding of course concepts, there was not enough here to warrant a passing grade. In future work, please be sure all responses use course material to support you and clearly and completely address all elements of the questions.Please read over my in-text comments and contact me if you have any questions.Regards,Carol
(0.49 / 0.65); : Explains One Way One Can Alter Their Verbal Communication to Enhance Their Job Satisfaction, Utilizing Bevan
Basic - Minimally explains one way one can alter their verbal communication to enhance their job satisfaction, vaguely utilizing Bevan. Relevant details are missing, unclear, and/or inaccurate.
(0.49 / 0.65); : Explains One Way One Can Alter Their Nonverbal Communication to Enhance Their Job Satisfaction, Utilizing Bevan
Basic - Minimally explains one way one can alter their nonverbal communication to enhance their job satisfaction, vaguely utilizing Bevan. Relevant details are missing, unclear, and/or inaccurate.
(0.00 / 0.65); : Discusses How Following These Guidelines Could Help the Student or Some Hypothetical Worker to Be More Satisfied at Work
Non-Performance - The discussion of how following these guidelines could help the student or some hypothetical worker to be more satisfied at work is either nonexistent or lacks the components described in the assignment instructions.
(0.49 / 0.65); : Explains What Rapport Is and Why It Matters, Utilizing Bevan
Basic - Minimally explains what rapport is and why it matters, vaguely utilizing Bevan. Relevant details are missing, unclear, and/or inaccurate.
(0.42 / 0.65); : Defines and Describes One of the First Three Principles of Building Rapport (Confidence, Creativity, or Caring), Utilizing Bevan
Below Expectations - Attempts to define and describe one of the first three principles of building rapport (confidence, creativity, or caring); however, does not utilize Bevan, and/or significant details are missing, unclear, and inaccurate.
(0.42 / 0.65); : Shares an Example to Illustrate How One of the Principles of Building Rapport Can Enhance a Personal or Professional Relationship
Below Expectations - Attempts to share an example to illustrate how one of the principles of building rapport can enhance a personal or professional relationship; however, significant details are missing and unclear.
(0.57 / 0.65); : Defines Self-Disclosure, Utilizing Bevan
Proficient - Defines self-disclosure, utilizing Bevan. Minor details are missing, slightly unclear, or inaccurate.
(0.49 / 0.65); : Explains at Least Two of the Rewards of Self-Disclosure, Utilizing Bevan
Basic - Minimally explains at least two of the rewards of self-disclosure, vaguely utilizing Bevan. Relevant details are missing, unclear, and/or inaccurate.
(0.42 / 0.65); : Explains at Least Two of the Risks of Self-Disclosure, Utilizing Bevan
Below Expectations - Attempts to explain at least two of the risks of self-disclosure; however, does not utilize Bevan, only one reward of self-disclosure is explained, and/or significant details are missing, unclear, and inaccurate.
(0.29 / 0.38); : Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics
Basic - Displays basic comprehension of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains a few errors which may slightly distract the reader.
(0.33 / 0.37); : Written Communication: APA Formatting
Proficient - Exhibits APA formatting throughout the paper. However, layout contains a few minor errors.
(0.40 / 0.40); : Written Communication: Word Requirement
Distinguished - The length of the paper is equivalent to the required number of words.
Overall Score: 4.81 / 7.00 Overall Grade: 4.81