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Multiple cases of plagiarism detected:

1) Paraphrasing plagiarism means rephrasing a piece of text in your own words. Paraphrasing without citation is the most common type of plagiarism.

Paraphrasing itself is not plagiarism so long as you properly cite your sources. However, paraphrasing becomes plagiarism when you read a source and then rewrite its key points as if they were your own ideas.

2) Mosaic plagiarism (also known as patchwork plagiarism or incremental plagiarism) means copying phrases, passages, and ideas from different sources and putting them together to create a new text. This includes slightly rephrasing passages while keeping many of the same words and structure as the original.

This type of plagiarism requires a little more effort and is more insidious than just copying and pasting from a source, but plagiarism checkers like Turnitin (your percentage from Turnitin is 48%) can still easily detect it.

3) Citing incorrectly. The key to avoiding plagiarism is citing your sources. You need to correctly format your citations according to the rules of the citation style you are following.

If you don’t include all the necessary information or you put it in the wrong place, you could be committing plagiarism. Most styles require in-text citations plus a reference list or bibliography at the end of your paper, where you give full details of every source you cited.

I'm not going to file a formal report this time, but this is a warning and your grade with reflect the deductions.