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INITIAL POST

Hi, class, it wasn’t easy to come up with a problem, but after thinking for a long night, it was easy to chose one. In my human resource career, I will consider cultural diversity in a professional working environment. I have a weakness in adapting to changes in working environment and the people I find there. The article that I found, and my introduction worked well. However, I still need to add more content to my first paragraph to sound more convincing. Here is my draft:

To: Mary Jones, Chief Human Resources Officer, Johnson & James Health Care Company

From: Desminique Rowell, Human Resource Manager, Johnson & James Health Care Company

Date: September 27, 2018

Subject: Considering Cultural Diversity in Organizations

How often does cultural diversity in organizations affect the way they operate? Globalization and increased customer goods and services demands, have encouraged many organization to venture into the international market to continue expanding their businesses. Organizations must expand their employee base by employing many skilled personnel from different cultural backgrounds. Negative outcomes of cultural integration in workplaces, affect their goods and service delivery. Johnson & James, a global health company cannot assume this fact, as its operation are also affected by cultural diversity. These challenges the companies’ operation in delivering its goods and services, creating a deficit in services and financial surges. The issue can be addressed by the company conducting motivational, leadership and behavioral workshops to enhance diversity training and development.

According to Alhejji et al. (2016), diversity training programs enhances development of employee knowledge, skills, and attitude which enhances culture in a workplace. Many organizations utilize cultural diversity in their workplace to encourage innovation and development of new-problem solving ideas. In an organization setup, employees need to come up with innovative ways of improving service delivery and enhancing customer-employee relationship. Employing personnel from different cultural background provides an organizational frontier to achieve it. However, poor management of cultural diverse teams, can result in a company losing it credibility to the customer purchasing power.

I know I can find a solution to this problem soon.

Here is my question: what can I add to the first paragraph to make it more effective?

Thanks!

Desminique Rowell

Hi, class, it wasn’t easy to come up with a problem, but after thinking for a long night, it was easy to chose one. In my human resource career, I will have to consider cultural diversity in professional environment working problem. I have a weakness in adapting to changes in working environment and the people I find there. The article that I found, and my introduction worked well. However, I still need to add more content to my first paragraph to sound more convincing. Here is my draft: 

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According to Alhejji et al. (2016), diversity training programs enhances development of employee knowledge, skills, and attitude which enhances culture in a workplace

Many organizations utilize cultural diversity in their workplace to encourage innovation and development of new-problem solving ideas.