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you will be required to submit a supplemental essay of 650 words or less in response to the following prompt.

The University of Miami's official mascot is the ibis. Folklore maintains that the native marsh bird is the last to take shelter before a hurricane hits and the first to emerge once the storm passes, making it an apt symbol of courage and resilience.

Considering your ability to control your own motivation and behavior, how have past experiences helped build your courage and resilience to persist in the face of academic and life challenges so that, once these storms pass, you can emerge in continued pursuit of your goals?

In addition, you will be asked to respond to a prompt in the Common Application addressing your reasons for transferring to the University, using 650 words or less. This essay portion of the application gives you the opportunity to demonstrate your ability to develop your thoughts, to communicate them clearly, and to write them concisely conveying your unique voice. We also ask that you list your involvement in extracurricular activities, outside of school involvements and/or commitments; these will be evaluated as another factor in the admission process.

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I am applying for the Aerospace engineering program

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· I would would like to do my part in the the program as a woman in the aerospace field

· In the last year, I got my associate of science degree in avionics at Broward College. I was an awarded winner of The Bryant-Tylor Scholarship because my GPA during was higher than 3.5. I would like to get this opportunity because since I was a child, I realized that I am passionate about aircrafts and everything related to the aerospace field. Then when I moved to United StatesI realized all my dreams can become a reality, I started to look for alternatives and was there when I chose University of Miami, ranked #6 in Florida as Best's Schools offering aerospace engineering.