ACS PE - course Ethics Assignment
This is your feedback for Assignment 1.
Score & Feedback for each section:
Meeting the procedural requirements : 11/15
very short work – when taken off the references and other bits, the raw content is less than 500 words; you need to thicken up your work
no reference to any relevant legislation at all?
please do not forget to proofread your documents ensuring layout and language errors are eliminated to the maximum
How logically and thoroughly you identified and described professional and ethical issues arising in the scenario : 6/30
all values are spot-on, well done!
however, where are your five relevant codes of conduct? You should have listed them as per the assignment requirements
no discussion on a relevant legislation at all?
losing significant marks here due to absence of the list of five code of conduct clauses and discussion on a relevant legislation
How well you developed your recommendations and supported them with relevant, correct referencing : 8/30
your application of the MacDonalds framework is very thin
you are showing some understanding of the issue, yet I am afraid not much marks can be garnered for this section as you did not apply the framework with adequate level of information – this is a critical issue for this assignment
the issue here is that most of your discussion is a reword of the framework, not its contextual application
perhaps the best way to achieve this is to have aa heading for each step, and then apply the framework accordingly
How well you convinced the reader that you understood the issues : 10/20
some understanding for the ethical issues has been shown; however, recommendations are falling short
if you applied the framework more thoroughly, you could have better recommendations that would have given you higher marks
Did material you presented generate interest in the reader : 2/5
Total: 37
Outcome:
Your submission needs further revision to achieve the criteria for a pass grade.