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expand Data Chart or Graph Summarizing Costs of Failure to Address the Problem (B) assessment

Data Chart or Graph Summarizing Costs of Failure to Address the Problem (B)

9.56 / 11.2512345

4. 4: Good

9.56 points

Data chart or graph summarizing costs of failure to address the problem is mostly complete and correct and includes relevant detail.

Criteria Comments

I like what you have started here but I'd like a little more focus on the "costs" of not addressing this issue. I see that you have included data to show the monetary costs but it is difficult to comprehend and it might be better if you simplify the data so that its more concise.

expand Data Chart or Graph Summarizing Results of Previous Attempts to Address the Problem (B) assessment

Data Chart or Graph Summarizing Results of Previous Attempts to Address the Problem (B)

7.31 / 11.2512345

2. 2: Less Than Satisfactory

7.31 points

Data chart or graph summarizing results of previous attempts to address the problem is incomplete or incorrect.

Criteria Comments

Remember, here you are supposed to identify any previous attempts that were used to address this problem. I didn't see any of the previous solutions identified. What were some of the previous solutions that were attempted and how does your graph summarize this data?

expand Data Chart or Graph Summarizing Potential Solutions for Addressing the Problem (B) assessment

Data Chart or Graph Summarizing Potential Solutions for Addressing the Problem (B)

8.44 / 11.2512345

3. 3: Satisfactory

8.44 points

Data chart or graph summarizing at least five potential solutions for addressing the problem is partially complete and correct and includes some relevant details.

Criteria Comments

This is a good start but I'd like to see a little more development. Here you were to provide a graph to summarize at least five potential solutions for addressing the problem is complete and correct and includes extensive relevant details. Which were the five potential solutions you have identified?

expand Excel Spreadsheet Summarizing Collected Data (B) assessment

Excel Spreadsheet Summarizing Collected Data (B)

11.25 / 11.2512345

5. 5: Excellent

11.25 points

Excel spreadsheet, including date, source, type, and summary findings of collected data, is complete and accurate.

Criteria Comments

No comments.

expand Research assessment

Research

11.25 / 11.2512345

5. 5: Excellent

11.25 points

Research is supportive of the rationale presented. Sources are distinctive and address all of the issues stated in the assignment criteria.

Criteria Comments

No comments.

expand Visual Appeal assessment

Visual Appeal

9.56 / 11.2512345

4. 4: Good

9.56 points

Thematic graphic elements are used but not always in context. Visual connections mostly contribute to the understanding of concepts, ideas, and relationships. Differences in type size or color are used well and consistently.

Criteria Comments

No comments.

expand Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, and language use) assessment

Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, and language use)

3.75 / 3.7512345

5. 5: Excellent

3.75 points

The writer is clearly in command of standard, written, academic English.

Criteria Comments

No comments.

expand Documentation of Sources assessment

Documentation of Sources

3.75 / 3.7512345

5. 5: Excellent

3.75 points

Sources are completely and correctly documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, and format is free of error.

Criteria Comments

No comments.

Instructor Comments

Guerline - Thank you for your submission on this assignment. Please see my comments in the grading rubric.