2 Pages Reflection paper

DTE
TolmanDiamondCH11.pdf

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Good writers will tell you what they are going to do. That is what's happening here.
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Here they describe the incompatibility of these two approaches
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Also note the use of active voice here. "We want to suggest..." Another example of good writing
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This is a very empirical, rather than theory-driven argument, which is emblematic of the overall argument they are making
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This marks the end of the 'introduction' section and gives a road map of where the rest of the article is going.
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Intro of the theory
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Data that support the theory
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Actually, we will discuss this claim ^ with some new thoughts/evidence.
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More theory
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More data for this new piece of the theory
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Think: Any problems with this strategy?
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Specifically, these neurochemicals are released when children snuggle with their mothers AND when lovers touch each other (and when people pet dogs)
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Aha, see!
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Do you think only in pairs?
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You should be familiar with these from other psych classes. Now applied to human sex

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Can you think of a useful example to illustrate this?
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Remember this when we get to reparative therapy programs later
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Make sense? The language here is kind of technical
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We use this in IO psych a LOT
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Similar to equity theory, if you are familiar with that
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Aha, this is equity theory here
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This is now describing something similar to expectancy theory. It's interesting how these theories for sexual behavior are also used in other domains (e.g., work motivation)
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Again, an assumption of just two people here
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So, here we are shifting to the other main types of arguments that were introduced earlier
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I'm noticing here that the language is now a bit harder to follow and much more technical. I'm guessing that one author wrote the previous section and the other wrote this one. This is a sign of bad writing (we shouldn't be able to tell a difference)
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This is important but notice how the flowery language obscures meaning
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Do you think it is possible to convey these ideas in a more simple way? Why do you think this last sentence is so long?
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