Capstone Project

Preston2146
TEACHERRESPONSEWEEK2.docx

TEACHERS RESPONSE TO WEEK 2 REPORT.

Thank you for your report. You covered all of the required elements. I'd like to see you reorganise this section a bit and improve the flow of thoughts. Your paragraphs were a bit choppy. I suggest starting with a short introduction telling your reader what this section will cover. Try to add real life examples or data to support your design.

Please see my comments in your report.