CURRENT PRACTICE OF MANAGERIAL ACCOUNTING
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Submitted review on: 11/4/2018 11:22:05 PM Reviewed by: Lauren S
Topic of essay: Managerial Accounting Where are you in the writing process: I think I'm on track but ready for feedback Review priorities: Thesis, Organization and paragraph development, Sentence construction, Sentence variety and clarity
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Higher-order writing concerns In this section, you'll see feedback from your tutor about your essay's content and organization.
CLEAR AND FOCUSED THESIS: OK, but needs work
WELL-DEVELOPED AND LOGICAL ARGUMENT SUPPORTING THESIS: OK, but needs work
ORGANIZATION & PARAGRAPHING: OK, but needs work
PROPER SUPPORT OF ARGUMENTS: Some problems
PROPER CREDITING OF SOURCES: Some problems
OTHER FEEDBACK: Hello! There are some strong ideas present in this paper. Please see the comments. A great deal of the phrasing is unclear. Many sentences are incomplete. These incomplete thoughts are hard to follow. Also try to use more direct language. Stating your ideas in more concise terms is the better way to make your points. Please also see the resource below.
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/mechanics/sentence_fragments.html
Lower-order writing concerns In this section, you'll see feedback from your tutor about your essay's style and grammar.
SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION: Some errors
WORD CHOICE: Some problems
GRAMMAR: Some errors
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SENTENCE VARIETY & CLARITY: Some problems
TRANSITIONS: Some errors
FORMATTING CITATIONS: Some problems
OTHER FEEDBACK: Pay attention to your comma and article usage. Also maintain parallel structure. Please see the comments as well as the resources below.
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/commas/extended_rules_for_commas.html
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/grammar/using_articles.html
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/mechanics/parallel_structure.html
Additional feedback and resources In this section, you'll see a holistic evaluation of your essay's strengths and areas for improvement. If
appropriate, your tutor may also share links to online resources dealing with specific areas of writing where you need more help.
After addressing these areas, I would encourage you to return for another review. Best of luck with this assignment!
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