Peer review
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Lin
Qinhui Lin
English 1B
Professor Negus
10/28/18
Small
The ocean is broad.
The sky is huge.
The land is vast.
Fish swim in the sea.
Birds fly in the sky.
Horses run on the grass.
The fish swim from the Pacific to the Atlantic.
The Bird fly from east to west.
The horse ran from the grassland to the desert.
Fish from the Pacific Ocean don't know what fish in the Atlantic says.
Bird alone fly from east to west.
Horses in the prairie are not suitable for the desert because it is not a camel.
Lonely
Lonely
Lonely
The fish want to swim back to the Pacific but can’t find the direction.
The bird wants to fly back to the east but has no strength.
The horse has fallen in the dry desert.
Fortunately, the fish meets its companion and they get together.
The bird is lucky it meets someone who feeds it.
The horse can also find water in arid deserts
Thankfully.
Thankfully.
As a kind of literary genre, poetry is a special genre. There is usually a great deal of figurative language and rhythm. There are many based devices in a poem, like imagery, form, stanzas and diction etc. However, in my opinion, that are secondary, the most important thing in a poem is what emotion the author wants to convey to audiences through the poem. The poem Small conveys the emotion change from loneliness to rejoice. Also, the poem conveys the information of the globalization where the animals from a place move to another new place.
Small is a simple poem. In the third stanzas, it describes the situation of the animals when they leave their hometown for another place, they feel lonely. That is a common phenomenon of immigrants for globalization. It uses animals such as fish, birds and horses to refer to people, which indicates different races and people with different skin colors leaving their countries to a new place. “From the Pacific to the Atlantic;” “from east to west;” “from the grassland to the desert,” those words indicate people cross the long distance to new place, and people can’t easy meet their family because of the long distance.
In the sixth stanzas, those sentences describe the barriers people met when they get into a new environment. Although globalization is a trend, culture shock still exists. New immigrants have a hard time, whether it's the language barrier, homesickness in a foreign country or adaption to new environment. There are so many challenges to new immigrants.
In the last two stanzas of the poem that describe the positive of globalization, the new immigrants will get help from other people, the new immigrant will overcome the difficult and adapt to the new environment finally. There is another repetition “Thankfully,” is the author convey the hope to audiences.
The United States is a large country of immigrants, immigration is a major branch of globalization. With the development and progress of society, globalization as a trend, we should treat it rationally. We should learn to tolerate and accept the culture of other countries. At the same time, we should give respect to different races and colors of skin, so that the world will be better.