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Royneisha Smith GHY 101 by Royneshia Smith

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T it le: make it cat chy.

Explain: I don't underst and

Cit at ion: not t he correct f ormat

Illust rat ions: what does t his show or t ell me?

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Ref erences: st art wit h t he aut hor

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Royneisha Smith GHY 101 ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

en.wikipedia.org Int ernet Source

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FINAL GRADE

35/50 Royneisha Smith GHY 101 GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Sp. T his wo rd is misspelled. Use a dictio nary o r spellchecker when yo u pro o f read yo ur wo rk.

Title: make it catchy. Grab the reader's attentio n with yo ur title. What is interesting o r surprising abo ut yo ur paper?

Explain: I don't understand

Citation: not the correct f ormat Do n't use web addresses as citatio ns

Illustrations: what does this show or tell me? Exactly what do es this illustratio n sho w o r tell me that helps make yo ur po int?

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S/V T his subject and verb may no t agree. Pro o f read the sentence to make sure the subject agrees with the verb.

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Ref erences: start with the author

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All ref erences sho uld start with the autho r- - o r, if there is no t a human autho r, start with the name o f the publicatio n o r o rganizatio n respo nsible.

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RUBRIC: 10 1 1ST REPORT 20 17_0 9 _20 50 PT

CIT AT IONS

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REFERENCES

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GRAMMAR

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DID YOU CIT E YOUR SOURCES? Did yo u f ully and pro perly cite yo ur so urces within the text and f o llo wing all illustratio ns? Did yo u avo id using o nly the web addresses as citatio ns? Citatio ns—in the text, o r under illustratio ns—sho uld be the autho r’s name, o rganizatio n, o r publicatio n respo nsible, f o llo wed by the year if available. Fo r example: (Smith 2015), (Washingto n Po st), o r (Central Intelligence Agency)

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DID YOU PROVIDE COMPLET E & CORRECT REFERENCES? Did yo u pro vide co mplete and pro per ref erences at the end o f yo ur paper? Do n't use the Web address o nly. Example: Denyer, Simo n. 2011. Amid po pulatio n bo o m, India ho pes f o r ‘demo graphic dividend’ but f ears disaster. Washingto n Po st. Octo ber 15: http://www.washingto npo st.co m/wo rld/asia_pacif ic/amid- po pulatio n- bo o m- india- ho pes- f o r- demo graphic- dividend- but- f ears- disaster/2011/10/12/gIQA9I4 nmL_sto ry.html

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DID YOU USE CORRECT GRAMMAR? Did yo u re- read yo ur wo rk to avo id distracting typo s, misspellings, and grammatical erro rs? Pro o f read caref ully, o r ask a f riend to do so .

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DARNED GOOD WORK (6)

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ILLUST RAT IONS

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EXPLANAT IONS

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DID YOU ILLUST RAT E YOUR POINT ? Did yo u make clear what yo ur illustratio ns are suppo sed to sho w o r tell me? Did yo u pro vide yo ur o wn descriptive titles f o r yo ur illustratio n, as well as a pro per citatio ns?

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DID YOU DEFINE AND EXPLAIN ALL YOUR T ERMS AND CONCEPT S? Did yo u write in yo ur o wn wo rds? Did yo u write so that any interested reader co uld understand all the inf o rmatio n and illustratio ns yo u present?

EXCELLENT WORK (7)

COMPLET ENESS

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ABOUT HALF RIGHT (4)

DARNED GOOD WORK (6)

EXCELLENT WORK (8)

RUBRIC

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DID YOU PROVIDE EVERYT HING REQUEST ED? Did yo u pro vide everything specif ied in the instructio ns f o r this repo rt: at least 2000 wo rds o f text, f ive illustratio ns, and eight research so urces?

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DID YOU INCLUDE T HE RUBRIC, WIT H T HE GRADE YOU EXPECT ?

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DID YOU WRIT E WIT H ST YLE? (No po ints, just advice). Did yo u start with a catchy title that grabs the reader's interest? Did yo u o pen with a creative, readable, inf o rmative o pening paragraph that enco urages the reader to co ntinue? Did yo u co nsider meeting with the USM Writing Center? http://www.usm.edu/writing- center

MADE SOME EFFORT (0)

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