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Outline

● People seem to underestimate the power and value of art. What causes them to

underestimate that and how should we fix it?

● The importance of art and how it affects the world.

● The range of art education should be spread more widely.

● What causes people to belittle the education of art and how should we fix this?

● How do people view art and how is it different from artists’ view?

● Why are art education no longer important and why some schools don’t offer art courses

anymore? How should we fix this problem?

Rough Draft

Art is not limited to a museum or an image on a wall; it takes on various shapes. It might be

an artwork gallery, a video you just saw, or a song you recently heard you recently saw in a. The

act of creating art is an entirely human experience. "Art is purely a human thing," Maggie

Fishman writes in her book. All kinds of art captivate you in unique ways and propel your ideas

to new heights. In this article, I will discuss how art has impacted the world and why it has lost

its relevance in many places.

To begin, art impacts society by influencing attitudes, establishing ideals, and interpreting

experiences across place and time. For instance, reading a book may have a profound effect on a

person's thinking. When you read someone's narrative and hear their views, you enter that

person's mentality and begin to think about things in new ways. Their words penetrate your

mind, conveying this message and influencing you to consider issues differently. Art captures

what factually accurate historical documents cannot: the sensation of being in a specific location

at a particular moment.

Additionally, art is communication in this way; it enables individuals from many cultures

and eras to communicate. Art is often used as a catalyst for societal change. It has the potential to

empower those who are socially or politically downgraded. Maggie highlights from the book

how art has aided political leaders (53). You may experience art in various ways, and the artist

wishes for it to affect you. Yes, I think that it can have a significant impact on society and human

behavior. While it may seem that images, music, and videos have the most effect on you, the

truth is that books are the most powerful and instructive because they connect with your mind

and emotions.

Art is the expression or application of a person's creative abilities and imagination. It

creates works that are mainly appreciated for their aesthetic or emotional capacity to move

audiences. However, many locations have ignored art for a variety of reasons. One significant

reason art is undervalued is that it is inaccessible. It is seen as a non-essential aspect of life,

reserved for a select few, but not for everyone. Art can and should be accessible to everyone. We

devalue art by not appreciating artists. Both the creator and the thing are considered to be part of

art. Most areas have lost their respect for art because they believe that art is just one manner or

one thing and are unaware that it is so much more. Many of these individuals are very practical

and see art only as a picture on a wall taking up space but providing no helpful function. They

are oblivious to the fact that art extends much beyond that range and scope.ss

To summarize, art is a diverse range of activities that include the creation of aural,

performative, or visual artworks that demonstrate an artist's imagination or creative abilities. Art

has had a broad range of effects on the world, including transmitting, expressing, and

communicating intents. Nonetheless, art is no longer regarded as it was in ancient times due to

various factors, including advancements in technology, its inaccessibility, and finally, its

inaccessibility.

Peer review

Peer Review based on MLA and Primary resource

After review the outline and rough draft you have provided, throughout your rough draft

there are mentions of your evidence but the MLA in-text citations are not correct; since

you have provided only the page number and not the author's last name or anything

else. This needs to be addressed and fixed before you are to submit your final draft, I

suggest looking into the resources that the professor has provided in the files portion of

the canvas module. In addition many of the claims only have one resource which is the

textbook, but there needs to be another outside source such as another primary

resource, secondary/tertiary resource, and to which I have located none in this rough

draft. I suggest getting another resource that fits the criteria of what the professor has

put into the guidelines and if you are in need of help finding another resource to fit into

your essay, please contact the professor for help in finding a resource for you. Overall, I

can see that the rough draft does have a lot of potential into becoming a good essay

with the content that was provided in the rough draft and I would recommend really

checking in with the teacher if you are finding trouble in finding a another resources.

Lastly, I would recommend following the reviews that the professor and the other peers

give you to help in writing this essay to get a good grade on it.