Kindly revise this task, I have placed an attachment to tell you what is wrong

Arun1990
revisionrequest.docx

Hey

I have a big problem with all the two tasks I gave you. Look at the following keenly

1. Look at you in texts, APA has a standard format, not just copy pasting for the sake. I am seeing things like this: occurs (Whitman, M. E., & Mattord, H. J. 2011). 

2. Look at the list of bibliography in all tasks you did, in fact all papers you sent, they should be in Alphabetical order with hanging indentation

3. The PowerPoint you sent is purely copy paste from word. It is like writing an essay in slides while this should be more of a presentation. Whatever is in the slides qualify for speaker notes. Which were not added.

4. Grammatical errors are so many. Cases of double full stops surely

5. The structures should be purely APA compliant, I wonder why a single paper should have more than 3 font styles used.

kindly review all the documents patiently, don’t try to get this off your shoulders quick, ensure your client is pleased.

I need this completed the by 12 noon PST Sunday.