economic report with some calculation needed
-Introduction is good but look a bit similar to my friend if you can make some changes .
-Portfolio performance : 1. name the excel that shows the calculation I made which you had only to explain it and say what the numbers means.. this part is done just be clear with which excel Is .
1. The graph that I sent shows the performance of the student compered to mine so you have to say according to the graph we can see that my performance was the best performance compared to the other students that’s because i invested in equity etc.. .
2. The excel I sent few min ago has 2 parts first part is my performance to be compared to the benchmark 60% equity 40% debt so say what is my performance compared to the benchmark and what it shows .
The second part of the excel is the comparison of all the assets to prove that my decision was right of investing in equity, so you explain this in the strategy part please use numbers that are in excel because when you say according to excel u have to be precise with the number (use the excel I sent with my new calculations ).. and say that according to the result we can see that equity had a high return. And change the numbers that you got when you compared the assets in the word page
4. Conclusion need to be more professional you have to change of what you learned and be more professional .