complete essay
You will need to use these two article as resources http://www.latimes.com/opinion/op-ed/la-oe-arellano-california-20170103-story.html http://articles.latimes.com/print/1990-12-30/opinion/op-10049_1_native-born The body paragraph needs to introduce these two sources, and a strong thesis. The first article is using in the first body paragraph, and the term I am using to describe is “DIVERSITY” (positive trait). You will need to rewrite it and achieve this requirment
* use the readings to present a general image of Californians
* offer an assessment by identifying at least two but no more than four traits affiliated with the Californian identity (identifying at least one strength and at least one weakness)
* and explain how and why the selected characteristics are indeed weaknesses and/or strengths, citing sources and providing examples and/or narrative evidence to support your evaluation
The second body paragraph is about my personal experience related to my first body paragraph. Add more details to make it stronger.
The third body paragraph is analyzing the article below.
http://articles.latimes.com/print/1990-12-30/opinion/op-10049_1_native-born
The term I am using in third body paragraph is “Lack of identity” (negative trait).
The fourth body paragraph is also about personal experience that related to the third body paragraph.
And final the conclusion.