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Report by Davinder Kalsi

Submission date: 15-Dec-2020 06:46PM (UTC+0000) Submission ID: 139618137 File name: 91602_Davinder_Kalsi_Report_1587385_1257486783.docx (58.12K) Word count: 2149 Character count: 11265

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8% SIMILARITY INDEX

7% INTERNET SOURCES

2% PUBLICATIONS

4% STUDENT PAPERS

1 3% 2 2% 3 1% 4 1% 5 1% 6 <1%

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Report ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

www.saudi24news.com Internet Source

Submitted to Otago Polytechnic Student Paper

Submitted to University of Sydney Student Paper

ideas.repec.org Internet Source

pezzottaitejournals.net Internet Source

www.food280.com Internet Source

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FINAL GRADE

32/100 Report GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

General issue wi th grammar and composition.

Macro-level analysis analysis lacks depth. missteps in analysis where it is applied lower than macro level. needs to reflect limitations of hofstede's model.

Micro-level analysis mostly out of focus discussion. discussion here should how culture affects the process of decision making, nego & comm., leadership and CQ and how can your sample firm be more effective to manage their challenges across cultures.

no use of core and essential texts. no use of assigned reading articles.

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no need for this heading in your intro. you can make your same point without this heading.

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you were able to explain the context and challenges for your sample firm

there is discussion of the flow of the report.

format issues as noted.

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WC Word choice error:<br>Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to come up with a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy tool when you're trying to find a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one you're looking up. However, it can often introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it has exactly the same meaning.

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WC Word choice error:<br>Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to come up with a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy tool when you're trying to find a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one you're looking up. However, it can often introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it has exactly the same meaning.

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Additional Comment

discussion here should how culture affects the process of decision making and how can your sample firm be more effective to manage their challenges across cultures.

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Comment 6

needs to recap important points of the report and summarize 3 key recommendations as advised in brief.

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