final assessment MN

Millie, your annotated bibliographies provide clear, detailed summaries of your sources, and your reflection demonstrates your research skills in evaluating sources: good work! While you hint at some of the connections between your sources and your own argument, there is room for you to be clearer about your argument and approach. Please see my marginal comments for suggestions about how you might strengthen your writing and focus your research. Note that in your research paper you will need to include parenthetical citations every time you quote, paraphrase, or summarize material from a source. Your sentence structure makes it clear which ideas are your own and which come from the article you are annotating, but readers need the page numbers so that they can locate this information. I look forward to seeing how your project develops.