Redo Assessment 4 Class 7
Instructions: This assessment was graded and I received a 70%. Read the question and comments. Add 2 slides answering question 1 and 2. The teacher left comments on how to achieve a distinguished grade.
OVERALL COMMENTS
Thank you for your work on this assessment. You have a good start with scoring guide criteria. This assessment was the second part of your two-part learning activity. This assessment provided you an opportunity to simulate the presentation of your health promotion plan on a specific health concern in your hypothetical community. Please review my comments. I look forward to your next version.
COMMENTS:
In order to receive a distinguished designation in this criterion, you needed to evaluate the outcomes and the attainment of health goals for your hypothetical participant(s). This evaluation signifies the degree to which the session was successful and whether revisions would be needed for future presentations. Was your session successful? Does it need revisions?
2. Evaluates educational session outcomes in terms of progress made toward Healthy People 2020 goals and leading health indicators. Clearly explain the need for revisions to better align future sessions with Healthy People 2020 goals.
COMMENTS:
I did not see this area of the scoring guide addressed in the assessment. In order to improve your designation in this criterion please refer to the assessment rubric so that all of the criteria are addressed. It is easy to miss a criterion at times.