Psychology
Psy Class.docx by Merlin Ramirez
Submission date: 08-Oct-2021 11:56AM (UTC-0400) Submission ID: 1668806544 File name: Psy_Class.docx (6.53M) Word count: 1029 Character count: 5118
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35 (Points Possible) -3 (Methods) -5.25 (Results) -2 (Writing Quality)
TOTAL SCORE = 24.75
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36% SIMILARITY INDEX
9% INTERNET SOURCES
6% PUBLICATIONS
36% STUDENT PAPERS
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Psy Class.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Submitted to Florida International University Student Paper
Submitted to University of Westminster Student Paper
FINAL GRADE
24/35 Psy Class.docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Text Comment. 35 (Points Possible)
Text Comment. -3 (Methods)
Text Comment. -5.25 (Results)
Text Comment. -2 (Writing Quality)
Text Comment. TOTAL SCORE = 24.75
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YOU NEED TO REPORT RELATIONSHIP STATUS HERE -.25
YOU NEED TO STATE WHERE THIS INFO CAN BE FOUND IN THE APPENDICES -.25
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WHO? WHERE DID THIS COME FROM? -.25
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state how many items were in this survey -.25
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this was supposed to be the second dv, because it came from the second survey, but for this one you were only supposed to pick 1 item and not compute from 2 -.5
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ok this was supposed to be the first dv because it came from the first survey
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two things here:
part II, part III, and parts 4 and 5 were each supposed to be described in a separate paragraph -.25
here, you need to state why we asked this question -.25
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how were they randomly chosen?
are you sure they are all from FIU?
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pretty sure we didn't let them choose which condition they wanted -.25
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here you need more detail about what was told to them during the consent process and you have to state that they all gave verbal informed consent -.5
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here, you have to use the word "debrief" -.25
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these numbers show up nowhere in your output -.25
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this makes no sense and i have no idea where your percentages came from -1
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every aspect of this is wrong...your first sentence is either incorrect or entirely unclear...you have used the AVOVA results from the other ANOVA...you did not run a Tukey post hoc, you ran a Bonferroni... you should have reported on 3 comparisons and only reported on 1... the one comparison you reported on you interpreted incorrectly -2
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all of this is incorrect as well -2
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you did not tie in one of your references in the Discussion -1
your editing, especially in the Discussion was pretty bad and you have grammar issues everywhere -1
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Comment 17
where is this citation in your main text?
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