gym proposal

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Advanced

Competent

Developing

Novice

Comments

Writing Task

Content

· Focused on assignment

· Thesis clearly stated

· Thesis fully developed in body

· Paragraphs fully developed

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· Addresses assignment

· Thesis stated

· Thesis developed in body

· Paragraphs developed

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· Addresses assignment

· Thesis stated

· Thesis addressed in body

· Paragraphs not fully developed

· Fully describes problem and solution

· Clear, accurate detail

· Includes effective supporting graphics

· Not clearly focused on assignment

· Thesis unclear

· Paragraphs weakly developed

· Proposal description confusing

· Weak use of detail

· Ineffective graphics

· Not relevant to assignment

· Lacks thesis

· Inadequate development of paragraphs

· Proposal description muddled

· Lacks detail

· Lacks graphics

Organization

· Introduction establishes context

· Introduction previews content and order

· Conclusion restates thesis

· Paragraphs have topic sentence that support thesis

· Paragraphs focused

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· Introduction adequate

· Conclusion adequate

· Topic sentences support thesis

· Paragraph focus strays

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· Introduction vague

· Conclusion vague

· Topic sentences for most paragraphs

· Paragraph focus/unity weak

· Separate, labeled sections

· Introduction inadequate

· Conclusion inadequate

· Topic sentences missing or not focused on thesis

· Paragraphs lack focus/unity

· Sections not clearly separate and labeled

· Inconsistent modeling

· Lacks introduction

· Lacks conclusion

· Paragraphs lack topic sentences

· Topic sentences do not support thesis

· No separation of sections

Grammar

and Usage

· Controlled & varied sentence structure

· Accurate punctuation

· Correct spelling

· Correct diction

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· Controlled sentence structure

· Minor punctuation errors

· Correct spelling

· Correct diction

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· Poor sentence structure

· Inaccurate punctuation

· Few spelling errors

· Diction errors

· Maintains present tense

· Maintains 3rd person pov

· Many sentence structure errors

· Many punctuation errors

· Many spelling errors

· Many diction errors

· Tense shifts

· Pov shifts

· Garbled sentence structure

· Excessive grammar errors

· Excessive punctuation errors

· Excessive spelling errors

· Excessive diction errors

· Inconsistent Pov

Documentation Using MLA Format

· Accurate

· Adequate

· Clear

Minor errors

· Internal

· External

Weak control

· Internal

· External

Excessive errors

· Internal

· External

Failure to use MLA: automatic assignment failure

· Lacks internal or external

Grade adjustments

Point assessed:

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