3 pages tlic
You have to give the name of the play and the author in your first couple of sentences.
The final conclusion in the first section is no good, but we can keep it and then add another one
You need to have a framework for moral reasoning, and you need to make a case for each character's moral reasoning.
You need to include quotes to support your analysis. There must be quotes for each point
You shouldn't be citing the Rodriguez paper because it's just a student paper. Also, I am evaluating you on your ability to create your own arguments about this play, not on your ability to research the criticism.You need to have your own analysis.
Its ok Compare Nancy and Ana in same paragraph no need separate them and discuss all the time,
Need more thesis. How they dealing with their husband with different point of view? Their relationship? How they question themselves?
In general, this is a little more general and the support of quotes needs to be more detailed.
moral reasoning：
Now, you might say, "Well, everyone knows right from wrong! It's clear!" To that, most philosophers would say, "Not so fast!" Sure, there are actions which most people agree are wrong, such as not killing, not pushing occupied baby strollers down flights of stairs, not cheating on your essays. But life is chock full of many situations where what's right or wrong is more complex. Should you take candy from a baby? Maybe, maybe not. Depends on the situation. (Who the heck even gave candy to a baby to begin with? That was a dumb move.) In short, our gender, our culture, our personal values--any number of factors might influence what we think is right or wrong in some situations. It is precisely the job of literature to explore such situations where morality is ambiguous, and such characters who struggle to decide what is right. (Stories about totally moral clear situations in which the characters are flat and morally certain are really pretty boring, after all, to anyone over the age of eight.)
For this essay, you are to explain and analyze the moral reasoning of the two characters you select from the list of options in the essay prompt, which will entail some comparing and contrasting of the characters' moral reasoning. You will need to quote the play to illustrate your points.
And Professor also said that there was a scene that Ana didn't tell her husband the whole story at the end.This scene will help.