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All that you have to do this week is to send me your topic and thesis statement for the comparison/contrast paper for suggestions and approval if you have not done so already, along revising the argument paper, writing the final course paper, and finishing the discussion board. Again, the final due date for the comparison/contrast paper and discussion board posts is December 4th. No work will be accepted or graded after December 4th and no past work that was not turned in on its due date will be accepted or graded. In short, all you have to do is write the final paper, revise the argument paper, and keep posting and replying in the discussion board. Lastly, the final paper is not a research paper. Do not do research or place it into a paper. If you do, I will have to grade the paper according to all of the MLA rules, and improperly sourced papers cannot receive a passing grade. Also, make sure to compare two products or services, not personal and subjective preferences, like Deer Park water being better than Dasani water, Coke being better than Pepsi, steak tasting better than chicken, or cake being better than pie. If you are stuck, Walmart can be compared to Target or Wawa can be compared to 7-11. The outline below is keyword outline. An outline is not required to be turned in, but you may want to create an outline to help you write the paper. Do not plagiarize the example. Write your own paper with your own topic. We are almost done. Hang in there.

Comparison/Contrast keyword example outline:

Point by point outline:

Introduction

Thesis statement…make sure it is the last sentence in the introduction.

McDonald’s is better than Burger King because of the food, service, and atmosphere.

First body paragraph: Food

1. McDonald’s

-Burgers -- grilled, juicy, 100% Angus

-Fries -- hot, crispy, golden brown

-Shakes -- thick, rich, creamy

-Burgers -- microwaved, hockey puck, dog

-Fries -- cold, soggy, burnt

-Shakes -- watery, bland, runny

Second body paragraph: Service

1. McDonald’s

-Friendly-- greeting, smile, thank you

-Fast -- 3 minutes, exact/correct

1. Burger King

-Rude -- no greeting, frown, get out/leave

-Slow -- 10 minutes, incorrect/wrong

Third body paragraph: Atmosphere

1. McDonald’s

-Clean -- no ketchup or mustard on tables, floors not sticky, restroom has toilet paper and paper towels

-Family -- safe playground, song Happy by Pharrell

1. Burger King

-Dirty -- smeared ketchup and mustard on tables, floors greasy, bathroom no toilet paper or paper towels.

-Teenagers -- screws sticking out on playground slide, song Do’in the Butt

Conclusion

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