“Life as a teen”
Every chance I get,
I look at the trend, Comment by Tianyao Ni: Changed from "I use it to look at the trends" to "I look at the trend". Since the last line said the chance you get, you can directly say "look at the trend" instead of "use it" which seems unnecessary.
Neither paying attention to political aspect,
Nor economic affect,
Attending things I make differences,
I concern about poverty. Comment by Tianyao Ni: Rewrite these four lines because there are some unnecessary adjectives and your text could expressed more concise.
People suffering the pain but they call it a win,
Who am I to stand in between? Comment by Tianyao Ni: Deleted "Nevertheless" because the question mark is already show audiences that you wondering which position you stand for, thus nevertheless is not useful here
I write bizarre about society,
And they call it crap,
Singer sings a song and they call it crap,
They say I shouldn’t blame on the government,
While they feasting like hounds in their tents,
Communities lost while leaders grab and tuck,
Politics blind about the livelihood of people,
Politicians become farmer to make us herded hens,
Snakes have left the forest and book mansions?
Misguided, we selected hyenas to guard goats,
Now they are feasting on our throats,
Election selected themselves, earthly gods,
Electors are their servants,
News are horror stories,
Filled with woes and cries,
No one heed to such calls,
Even though all has been saw and heard,
The awakening is feared and all planned actions have been cleared.
Not pray for the Messiah,
Not run away from here,
I am young but not give up my land,
Where are the so-called heroes?
Why do we suffer from issues that had been foretold?
What happened to their remedies of gold?
Who will stand out and be bold,
Who will save us from our own hold?
Where do we run to and restore the old?