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Hello M,

 

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1. You mentioned: Audi Company targets to reduce electric cars by 2033. Your probably mean gas cars.

 

2. You mentioned: Automobiles using fossil fuels have been said to be the primary cause of increased air pollution. Please remove; adds no value ( a common sense statement).

 

2. You mentioned: . However, there are some Seasons when the demand for electric car batteries is lower than the other. Which? Also, seasons is not capitalized.

 

3. Market Forecast: You need a couple more sources to support this important section.

4. There were some grammatical mistakes; please run a spell/grammar check.

 

Otherwise, a good job!