Observation

Observation Essay Tips

 You get to decide how to organize it: will you organize it

chronologically, or group it by like things?

 It is NOT an autobiography: more about the person, place or

event than about you.

 Must use dialogue to push story along (internal dialogue is okay,

but there should be regular dialogue as well).

 Don't just describe: SHOW us!

 Keep your "silent" thesis in mind; what is it you want to show us

about this person, place or event?

 Some rules still apply: do not address reader ("you"); be careful

of being too conversational and casual; maintain organization.

 A central conflict would help define the essay and make it more

interesting. E.g. If I wrote an essay observing the goings-on at a

coffee shop, perhaps the conflict would be that I'm supposed to

be working, but my attention is diverted by all of the sights,

sounds and smells surrounding me. You don't have to insert a

tension or conflict, but it will make for a more interesting essay.