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Discourse Analysis

1) Mushroom Model Analysis

Vocabulary

· Speech is casual amongst coworkers as well as customers (preferably friendly)

· Still professional tone because in a work setting

· Use technical terms such as “Pony”, “STAR”, “TPP”, “BORE”, etc.

Behavior

· Interactions with customers are laidback, where many will help customers whenever they ask

· Taking initiative as employees to go above and beyond

· Because of its casual nature, some employees find it an opportunity to ‘slack off’

Dress-Code

· All employees are dressed in whatever style they prefer

· Still uphold a dress code where we cannot wear open-toed shoes, thin-strap tank tops, no excess exposure

· All employees are required to wear a H&M lanyard and their name tags

· Because it’s a retail job, the company emphasizes that we make the customers comfortable, therefore being casual is the best method especially since it is applicable to different types of customers

· As much as being casual and friendly, we still must uphold a level of professionalism because after all we are representing H&M as a company; professional tone should reflect H&M’s values and need to satisfy customer needs

· Many of H&M’s technical terms are derived from Swedish, thus translating into English which may be too long to say every time; alternative is to have acronyms which also helps fasten processes = efficiency

· Our managers have emphasized that we as employees shouldn’t overwhelm customers when they come in, but rather be like ‘ninjas’ and appear/disappear whenever customers need us. This gives customer the opportunity to browse on their own.

· One of H&M’s values is to have ‘entrepreneurial spirit’ where we make decisions on our own and take initiative to better our store

· Our store has a low-retention rate because of certain employees that do not fully follow the values of the company, making their experience difficult to catch up with therefore leading to slacking off and committing ‘time fraud’ where they are dishonest about time (time they clock in, duration of breaks, etc)

· Laws reinforce that employers must hire employees without any sort of bias or discrimination. But the company already believes in individuality, hence why there are diverse styles among my coworkers.

· Although all styles are appreciated at H&M, we must uphold a certain amount of professionalism while working which is why a dress code is also implemented; not only does it enforce appropriate clothing but also work-safe attire (ex. Shoes)

· We are all identified by lanyards and name tags, so we can maintain our individual styles even during work

Discourse

Analysis

1)

Mushroom

Model

Analysis

Vocabulary

·

Speech

is

casual

amongst

coworkers

as

well

as

customers

(preferably

friendly)

·

Still

professional

tone

because

in

a

work

setting

·

Use

technical

terms

such

as

Pony

,

STAR

,

TPP

,

BORE

,

etc.

Behavior

·

Interactions

with

customers

are

laidback,

where

many

will

help

customers

whenever

they

ask

·

Taking

initiative

as

employees

to

go

above

and

beyond

·

Because

of

its

casual

nature,

some

employees

find

it

an

opportunity

to

slack

off

Dress-Code

·

All

employees

are

dressed

in

whatever

style

they

prefer

·

Still

uphold

a

dress

code

where

we

cannot

wear

open-toed

shoes,

thin-

strap

tank

tops,

no

excess

exposure

·

All

employees

are

required

to

wear

a

H&M

lanyard

and

their

name

tags

·

Because

it

s

a

retail

job,

the

company

emphasizes

that

we

make

the

customers

comfortable,

therefore

being

casual

is

the

best

method

especially

since

it

is

applicable

to

different

types

of

customers

·

As

much

as

being

casual

and

friendly,

we

still

must

uphold

a

level

of

professionalism

because

after

all

we

are

representing

H&M

as

a

company;

professional

tone

should

reflect

H&M

s

values

and

need

to

satisfy

customer

needs

·

Many

of

H&M

s

technical

terms

are

derived

from

Swedish,

thus

translating

into

English

which

may

be

too

long

to

say

every

time;

alternative

is

to

have

acronyms

which

also

helps

fasten

processes

=

efficiency

·

Our

managers

have

emphasized

that

we

as

employees

shouldn

t

overwhelm

customers

when

they

come

in,

but

rather

be

like

ninjas

and

appear/disappear

whenever

customers

need

us.

This

gives

customer

the

opportunity

to

browse

on

their

own.

·

One

of

H&M

s

values

is

to

have

entrepreneurial

spirit

where

we

make

decisions

on

our

own

and

take

initiative

to

better

our

store

·

Our

store

has

a

low-retention

rate

because

of

certain

employees

that

do

not

fully

follow

the

values

of

the

company,

making

their

experience

difficult

to

catch

up

with

therefore

leading

to

slacking

off

and

committing

time

fraud

where

they

are

dishonest

about

time

(time

they

clock

in,

duration

of

breaks,

etc)

·

Laws

reinforce

that

employers

must

hire

employees

without

any

sort

of

bias

or

discrimination.

But

the

company

already

believes

in

individuality,

hence

why

there

are

diverse

styles

among

my

coworkers.

·

Although

all

styles

are

appreciated

at

H&M,

we

must

uphold

a

certain

amount

of

professionalism

while

working

which

is

why

a

dress

code

is

also

implemented;

not

only

does

it

enforce

appropriate

clothing

but

also

work-safe

attire

(ex.

Shoes)

·

We

are

all

identified

by

lanyards

and

name

tags,

so

we

can

maintain

our

individual

styles

even

during

work