discussion also response to 2 other people discussions, due in 5 hours
Editing Review
To: Edrees Nawabi
From: Garrett McKee
Subject: Financial Crisis of 2008 Essay
Date: January 25, 2020
Rhetorical Situation
The documents for this paper we written with academic vocabulary and demands understanding of basic and more advanced economic theories and understanding. The paper is wordy and lacks any sort of visual representation of information that could be included.
Writing Processes
Editing this paper began by using Words Spelling and Grammar check and correcting any errors and typing errors that tend to occur while writing a paper. When talking about Jimmy Carter and the Community Reinvestment Act, I want to include a link to the act itself. I want to remove any information that doesn’t impact the crash. I’d also like to include a table or chart the helps back up any compelling arguments I have.
Progress Towards Goal
I believe that I am behind on most goals by this week but will be all caught up in one week’s time.
Challenges
The biggest challenge for me is going to be not knowing how much I should actually cut out of this paper.