Literature paper

 You need an abstract.  You need examples to clarify your ideas.  Use data (primary and secondary resources) to show support for your

main ideas.  Conclude: using signal cues, draw this paragraph to a satisfying end and begin

to set up and position the reader for the next paragraph  Use direct quote  Paraphrase the authors writing using your own words but including page

numbers of the primary resources  You must use 5 secondary resources at least.  Developing the thesis statement more in terms of community ie the boys

world. What community or communities are these? This will also help you expand more critical ideas. For example, the boy is part of a youthful community, he is part of a religious community, he is part of an Irish community. All these contribute to more critical insight to what Joyce might be saying about paralysis for the young Irish.

 Fix your citations for APA. (Joyce pg.30) is not APA  Consider additional source work.  You need to document Page 3

o both for an individual and a community. Specified which community you mean?

o ‘Araby’ is set in the Author’s hometown… word Author is not capitalized o Dubliner can't come between parentheses ‘Dubliners’ o Araby can't be Italic ‘Araby’ o realization of the sad state of the world. State of the world … be specified

which worls o Considering that these are stories from his childhood… Give more details

before considering. o Which research you used o Moreover, in analyzing the story, rese… Where is the source? o Portrait of young man